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#1 suzy christine

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Posted 10 December 2008 - 01:15 AM

Oh what desire burns in me
Sweet breath on porcelain skin
Hands shake with anticipation
I see your face in crowds
Searching endlessly
Wanting to break silence
And whisper your name
Not now, not here
Wait, hold your breath
Opportunity will arise itself
How sweet you will taste
Pressed against these lips
My soul has an insatiable appetite
Thriving on the possibilities
Love is not a strong enough word
What I would give-
Just to able to touch your face,
Whisper into your ear,
Shuffle aimlessly in each others arms
Dancing to a song heard only in our hearts
A whirlwind romance
To sweep me off my feet with
Oh how I yearn-
To feel your skin against mine
The tension building
As does the friction
You burn inside of me.

If only I could be that pillow,
Upon which you lay your head on at night
That I may craddle your dreaming head.
To be the lips you press yours against each day
I crave you.

Edited by suzy christine, 12 December 2008 - 01:08 AM.

Love is addiction, Lived in passion.

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Posted 10 December 2008 - 01:17 AM

poem, kerri!?
jk idk who u are

but
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Posted 10 December 2008 - 01:20 AM

er...welcome?
i have no memory of you..tell us about yourself?
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Posted 10 December 2008 - 04:58 PM

yeaaaah i dont know who this person is.

#5 The One

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Posted 10 December 2008 - 05:27 PM

she was before all of your times







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#6 Ashe

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Posted 10 December 2008 - 05:31 PM

so...kerri.


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Posted 10 December 2008 - 06:38 PM

I think the poem is about ashe!
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Posted 10 December 2008 - 09:08 PM

its always about me

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Posted 10 December 2008 - 09:10 PM

Of course. You have groupies.
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Posted 10 December 2008 - 09:12 PM

groupies?
more like fuckbuddies
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Posted 10 December 2008 - 09:19 PM

best frinds for life

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Posted 10 December 2008 - 09:20 PM

BFFF
(for those who don't know th egreatness that is Pineapple Express: Best Friends For-Fucking-Ever)
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Posted 10 December 2008 - 09:21 PM

*waits patiently for dvd*

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Posted 10 December 2008 - 09:42 PM

QUOTE (sandyismylizard @ Dec 10 2008, 09:20 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
BFFF
(for those who don't know th egreatness that is Pineapple Express: Best Friends For-Fucking-Ever)


it's best fucking friends forever

otherwise it would be BFFFE
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Posted 10 December 2008 - 09:50 PM

ZING

#16 suzy christine

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Posted 10 December 2008 - 11:03 PM

and the insanity ensues. well if it's any consulation, i don't know any of you either. i joined irb when there was only about 250 members.

kuddos for me :]


oh and if you're wondering about the join date, i forgot all my previous acount information and was forced to create a new one. sad days

Edited by suzy christine, 10 December 2008 - 11:04 PM.

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Posted 10 December 2008 - 11:28 PM

anyway.......


#18 suzy christine

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Posted 12 December 2008 - 12:34 AM

don't get sassy now. just enjoy the poetry. or don't.
either way.
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Posted 12 December 2008 - 12:39 AM

lol well it would be a lot better if you respected the english language by using correct spelling and grammar. poetry is usually pretty free of form, but you're kind of abusing that..

(and for the record, my mother is an english teacher, so there is some validity in my opinion)
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Posted 12 December 2008 - 12:58 AM

welllllllllllll spelling is important unless you are talking in dialect
grammar is debatable ( see: e.e. cummings )
content however,

is key.





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